I feel like having a go at “creative writing” so this is where I’m gonna start. Before I commence I wish to state categorically that no part of my ramblings and/or writings that follow this preamble may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means without prior “written” permission from myself. All characters and situations depicted hereafter are fictitious and any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, was probably born from some deep-rooted fantasy or nightmare in my sub-conscious and is unintentional and therefore can be considered virtually coincidental.
I like your transitions and readability. I’ve been composing for Paid To Write, and they pay me well to put together blog articles not unlike this, and reviews. I make $100-$200 writing two or three hrs per day.
Looking at your content, you may enjoy doing the same.
A story.. OMG!